Rough Cut Feedback

We received a great number of criticisms for our "extremely" rough cut. Here are but a few listed.

• The shots around the table were much too long.
• The news paper shots were good, but there was no need for the zoom ins.
• Also there were some continuity editing problems with the lock picking shots.
• Without the voice over, the sequence makes no sense.

We have tried to rectify these errors in our final cut. With cleaner editing, shorter shots and the addition of a voice over.